Andrew’s Summer

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4 comments

  • At first,I was prepared not to like this story. Too sad. Then you flipped it on its head. I loved the way you delved into the various feelings, exposed them and marked their change. Nice one…. Just a small critique, the sentence reads that Andrew was divided into groups. Something doesn’t fit right!
    Love ya, DL

  • Quite excellent. I forgot I was even reading for a few minutes there. It felt more like I was experiencing it firsthand, and THAT is the hallmark of a great writer.

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